Friday, 12 September 2014

WALT use varied sentence beginnings and lengths.

The weather beaten boards on our house told it all.Paint was peeling off and barely holding on.Birds sat in the gutter waiting to fall out.

Inside all you could see was old timber and newspaper.The wooden floor was rotting quickly (you could barely stand on it).It had a bathroom.You had to boil the jug and pour it in the bathtub to have a bath because there wasn’t a shower or hot water.But that rotting house was great to live in;it had enuf in my likes;it was perfect.

Same same addition

WALT : To create a movie and explain to you how it works.

I think I did really well recording and saying stuff.

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